She was on the right spot, according to the map. The treasures hunts, gift must be hidden somewhere under this gigantic rock, she thought.
As, she dug, someone came and blindfolded and tied her hands from the back.
She was put in a chair and she could, suddenly feel the chair being lifted.
She screamed HELP, on top of her lungs. Her cry was replied by a birthday song.
As soon, as the blindfold was removed, she spotted all her friends & parents welcoming her, to make sure that her 16th birthday was a memorable one.
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This post has been written for a challenge bby Rochelle Wisoff at
What happy happy memories. Loved your honest About Me section of your (this) blog.
Wooah! What a creepy surprise. With family and friends like that, who needs enemies? Well told.
Such an uplifting story. A very beautifully structured piece.
The perfect comment, Neel.🤗
Thank God for the surprise! It was so close to turning creepy for her! Lovely story, Zainab!
I am so happy it ended well”)
Badiya aur mazedaar post hai,wish ki hum bhi aisa kar saktry 😊😊😊😊
Did not expect that ending. Lovely post Zainab.
It would habe been memorable! I’d have had pretty mixed feelings about the surprise conveyance.😯 Well told– you had me in suspense there.
What a delightful surprise 🙂
Dear Zainab,
I love the twist at the end. A memorable birthday indeed. 😉
Shalom,
Rochelle
A kidnap-ransom story played in my mind. good it turned out with a happy ending.
http://ideasolsi65.blogspot.in/2017/08/re-invent.html
That was scary for a moment, and what a happy resolution. Lovely story.